<h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is more polished and enjoyable than ever before. We hope you like it.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version. WordPress %s makes your writing experience even better.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
<div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
<p><?php
-$plugins_url = current_user_can( 'activate_plugins' ) ? admin_url( 'plugins.php' ) : 'http://wordpress.org/extend/plugins/';
-$themes_url = current_user_can( 'switch_themes' ) ? admin_url( 'themes.php' ) : 'http://wordpress.org/extend/themes/';
+$plugins_url = current_user_can( 'activate_plugins' ) ? admin_url( 'plugins.php' ) : 'http://wordpress.org/plugins/';
+$themes_url = current_user_can( 'switch_themes' ) ? admin_url( 'themes.php' ) : 'http://wordpress.org/themes/';
printf( __( 'Every plugin and theme in WordPress.org’s directory is 100%% GPL or a similarly free and compatible license, so you can feel safe finding <a href="%1$s">plugins</a> and <a href="%2$s">themes</a> there. If you get a plugin or theme from another source, make sure to <a href="%3$s">ask them if it’s GPL</a> first. If they don’t respect the WordPress license, we don’t recommend them.' ), $plugins_url, $themes_url, 'http://wordpress.org/about/license/' ); ?></p>