<h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s has lots of refinements we think you’ll love.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s makes it even easier to format your content and customize your site.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
<div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>