X-Git-Url: https://scripts.mit.edu/gitweb/autoinstalls/wordpress.git/blobdiff_plain/9e77185fafaf4e60e2b73821e0e4b9b1a11fb85f..1132430022383fdf47fa6cb9377300fd885297aa:/wp-admin/freedoms.php?ds=sidebyside

diff --git a/wp-admin/freedoms.php b/wp-admin/freedoms.php
index 101c7969..7d8dadb1 100644
--- a/wp-admin/freedoms.php
+++ b/wp-admin/freedoms.php
@@ -19,7 +19,7 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s brings you a smoother writing and management experience.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s helps you focus on your writing, and the new default theme lets you show it off in style.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>