X-Git-Url: https://scripts.mit.edu/gitweb/autoinstalls/wordpress.git/blobdiff_plain/256a3b381f63716209b3527d0a14442ae570c283..9441756a895fb4fdc4bcf20e0d228cef622663ca:/wp-admin/freedoms.php

diff --git a/wp-admin/freedoms.php b/wp-admin/freedoms.php
index a020a85d..ce9f9e23 100644
--- a/wp-admin/freedoms.php
+++ b/wp-admin/freedoms.php
@@ -19,21 +19,17 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
 
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to WordPress %s, the most beautiful WordPress&nbsp;yet.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s makes your site more connected and responsive.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
 
 <h2 class="nav-tab-wrapper">
-	<a href="about.php" class="nav-tab">
-		<?php _e( 'What&#8217;s New' ); ?>
-	</a><a href="credits.php" class="nav-tab">
-		<?php _e( 'Credits' ); ?>
-	</a><a href="freedoms.php" class="nav-tab nav-tab-active">
-		<?php _e( 'Freedoms' ); ?>
-	</a>
+	<a href="about.php" class="nav-tab"><?php _e( 'What&#8217;s New' ); ?></a>
+	<a href="credits.php" class="nav-tab"><?php _e( 'Credits' ); ?></a>
+	<a href="freedoms.php" class="nav-tab nav-tab-active"><?php _e( 'Freedoms' ); ?></a>
 </h2>
 
-<p class="about-description"><?php printf( __( 'WordPress is Free and open source software, built by a distributed community of mostly volunteer developers from around the world. WordPress comes with some awesome, worldview-changing rights courtesy of its <a href="%s">license</a>, the GPL.' ), 'http://wordpress.org/about/license/' ); ?></p>
+<p class="about-description"><?php printf( __( 'WordPress is Free and open source software, built by a distributed community of mostly volunteer developers from around the world. WordPress comes with some awesome, worldview-changing rights courtesy of its <a href="%s">license</a>, the GPL.' ), 'https://wordpress.org/about/license/' ); ?></p>
 
 <ol start="0">
 	<li><p><?php _e( 'You have the freedom to run the program, for any purpose.' ); ?></p></li>
@@ -46,10 +42,10 @@ include( ABSPATH . 'wp-admin/admin-header.php' );
 
 <p><?php
 
-$plugins_url = current_user_can( 'activate_plugins' ) ? admin_url( 'plugins.php' ) : 'http://wordpress.org/plugins/';
-$themes_url = current_user_can( 'switch_themes' ) ? admin_url( 'themes.php' ) : 'http://wordpress.org/themes/';
+$plugins_url = current_user_can( 'activate_plugins' ) ? admin_url( 'plugins.php' ) : 'https://wordpress.org/plugins/';
+$themes_url = current_user_can( 'switch_themes' ) ? admin_url( 'themes.php' ) : 'https://wordpress.org/themes/';
 
-printf( __( 'Every plugin and theme in WordPress.org&#8217;s directory is 100%% GPL or a similarly free and compatible license, so you can feel safe finding <a href="%1$s">plugins</a> and <a href="%2$s">themes</a> there. If you get a plugin or theme from another source, make sure to <a href="%3$s">ask them if it&#8217;s GPL</a> first. If they don&#8217;t respect the WordPress license, we don&#8217;t recommend them.' ), $plugins_url, $themes_url, 'http://wordpress.org/about/license/' ); ?></p>
+printf( __( 'Every plugin and theme in WordPress.org&#8217;s directory is 100%% GPL or a similarly free and compatible license, so you can feel safe finding <a href="%1$s">plugins</a> and <a href="%2$s">themes</a> there. If you get a plugin or theme from another source, make sure to <a href="%3$s">ask them if it&#8217;s GPL</a> first. If they don&#8217;t respect the WordPress license, we don&#8217;t recommend them.' ), $plugins_url, $themes_url, 'https://wordpress.org/about/license/' ); ?></p>
 
 <p><?php _e( 'Don&#8217;t you wish all software came with these freedoms? So do we! For more information, check out the <a href="http://www.fsf.org/">Free Software Foundation</a>.' ); ?></p>