-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s streamlines your workflow, whether you’re writing or building your site.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s helps you get your site set up the way you want it.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>