<h1><?php printf( __( 'Welcome to WordPress %s' ), $display_version ); ?></h1>
-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s is more polished and enjoyable than ever before. We hope you like it.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version. WordPress %s makes your writing experience even better.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
<div class="wp-badge"><?php printf( __( 'Version %s' ), $display_version ); ?></div>