-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s helps you focus on your writing, and the new default theme lets you show it off in style.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s helps you communicate and share, globally.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>