-<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version. WordPress %s changes a lot behind the scenes to make your WordPress experience even better!' ), $display_version ); ?></p>
+<p class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating to the latest version! WordPress %s helps you get your site set up the way you want it.' ), $display_version ); ?></p>