-<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s makes your site more connected and responsive.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
+<div class="about-text"><?php printf( __( 'Thank you for updating! WordPress %s streamlines your workflow, whether you’re writing or building your site.' ), $display_version ); ?></div>
<a href="about.php" class="nav-tab"><?php _e( 'What’s New' ); ?></a>
<a href="credits.php" class="nav-tab"><?php _e( 'Credits' ); ?></a>
<a href="freedoms.php" class="nav-tab nav-tab-active"><?php _e( 'Freedoms' ); ?></a>
<a href="about.php" class="nav-tab"><?php _e( 'What’s New' ); ?></a>
<a href="credits.php" class="nav-tab"><?php _e( 'Credits' ); ?></a>
<a href="freedoms.php" class="nav-tab nav-tab-active"><?php _e( 'Freedoms' ); ?></a>